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» Poem: Blood red waters
Blood red waters
written by Genocide Reaper
09:23 AM 4/8/05
In blood red waters we are cleaned.
All sins stained,
to the surface they are brought.
Swimming with the dead,
still shallow, your soul,
locked in your head.
Could it be.
The thought.
As you gaze out across the vast red waters,
filled to the wavy surface with mutilated carcasses.
Your life raft, a decaying body,
still feel lifeless?
A ship of wood, condemned to wander,
sailing around, islands of murder,
deep within the hull of the ship,
sets a chamber.
One breeding hate, and anger.
Death swiftly fly’s.
All around the blackened sky.
Such a magnificent sight,
all the demons eyeing you drown in plight.
Heaven’s not that far,
its just around the corner, with the war.
Greed in your heart, no more.
All that’s left is freedom to be sought.
Or so you thought.
Treasure, in your net, you’ve caught.
Sink or float on the mangled torso,
that's your choices, says the voices.
Greed will drag you to the bottom,
and a hope for something more,
shall lead you over the waves, into horizon and beyond.


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» Comments / Feedback
by DeathSentinel (4-8-2005 - 12:59 PM)
Nice one!

by Firequeen (4-8-2005 - 08:24 PM)
very dramtic and beautifull, i may not always agree with what you say in ur poems, but ill never stop being amazed by them

by XpaperdollX (4-8-2005 - 08:32 PM)
Amazing......

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