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» Poem: Where Are You Dad? (song-plz comment)
Where Are You Dad? (song-plz comment)
written by xxxvampire_loverxxx
03:06 AM 3/30/05
You went out and had your fun
Did you think about your daughters?
Did you think about your son?
Do you care that we're all missing you?
Do you care what you're putting us through?

And all I have to say is...

Where are you dad?
Do you want to come home?
Where are you dad?
Are you somewhere all alone?
Where are you dad?
What's on your mind?
Where are you dad?
Oh I wish we could go back in time
To the place where I last saw you
To the place where I last knew you
All I want to know is
Where are you dad?

Please just hear me out
Do you care about us at all?
Are we what you think about?
What are you gonna do?
We're still here waiting for you

And this is all I want to know

Where are you dad?
Do you want to come home?
Where are you dad?
Are you somewhere all alone?
Where are you dad?
What's on your mind?
Where are you dad?
Oh I wish we could go back in time
To the place where I last saw you
To the place where I last knew you
All I want to know is
Where are you dad?

What is wrong with you?
Why can't you see we miss you?
Why won't you see what you're putting us through
By leaving us all alone?
Where are you right now?
Are you out there in the crowd?
Do you care if I'm screaming aloud
That I hate you now?
I miss you so much right now
I've got to forget you somehow

Where are you dad?
Do you want to come home?
Where are you dad?
Are you somewhere all alone?
Where are you dad?
Do you want to come home?
Where are you dad?
Are you somewhere all alone?
Where are you dad?
What's on your mind?
Where are you dad?
Oh I wish we could go back in time
To the place where I last saw you
To the place where I last knew you
All I want to know is
Where are you dad?
Where are you dad?
Where are you dad?
Where are you dad?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
if you want to comment, go ahead. i'd appreciate it.
Writer: Shelby L. Allen
Dedication: Ryan L. Hollaman
3/29/05

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» Comments / Feedback
by Scythe42 (3-30-2005 - 03:17 AM)
wow,that was awsome.

by BeautifulGurlie15 (3-30-2005 - 03:19 AM)
this is a good poem i am in the same situation as you in my poem i did not put half the things you put. i know how it is to love someone and they not be here. very good

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