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» Poem: Rain (Inspired by "Stan" by Eminem)
Rain (Inspired by "Stan" by Eminem)
written by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx
06:56 AM 2/28/05
I'm cold
Someone keep me warm
I'm lonely
My life on the streets has gotten old
No place to call home
Food's gone cold
Pins and needles fall on me
I look up wondering why
Alone
Never took a stand
Grew up
Childhood passed too fast
Parents died
No close family
No friends
I am leaving this shithole
You never cared


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Not following the song that closely, but I just thought this up when listening to it.

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» Comments / Feedback
by a_grey_deaths_heart (2-28-2005 - 06:59 AM)
*claps* *whistles*.....wooooo.......lol that was a very very pretty one....maybe my fav from u..but im not quite shure yet...

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