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This Time I'm On My Knees.
written by Morbid Angel11:09 PM 1/9/05| Don't apologise for the things I do wrong, I should be the one saying sorry after you've pushed for so long, after you've sweat blood to glue our hearts together, I think you gave up on our promise of forever. But I never have and this time I'll prove I can do it, I'll get down on my knees before I plummet, I'd rather step down then slam into the ground. I'll hold my flag high and let go of my pride, it's not worth letting go just to be alone. I'll take your hand into mine and kiss you goodnight, it won't be forever, without you I'd die. I'm so close to nothing that I just keep on falling, I'm sure I'll hit the ground without you around. It's all in the past, all those times I made you beg, even when I was in the wrong, I messed with your head. I made you believe, that you were in love with me, but now I don't even know myself, I've lied so hard that you've started to think it's real, the one thing I'm not confused about is that this is real. I'll love you forever and never let go, you can push me away put I'll follow your heart, I'll always be here, down on my knees, I'll never give up, I've fucked it all up, please just kiss me. Reassure me that you need me. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (1-10-2005 - 11:16 PM)
| Great stuff. Back on form, perhaps? -Ed |
by xTroubledAngelxo (1-14-2005 - 01:16 PM)
| I really liked that. good poem. I actually feel that way rt now bout a bf... long stories. lol well maybe u could chek out some of my poemz sometime? |
by (anonymous) (1-17-2005 - 11:34 PM)
| Wow! I really like it. It shows alot of emotion and feeling. You did a REALLY good job. Keep up the good work! :)~Kath |
by (anonymous) (1-23-2005 - 10:24 AM)
| i loved it.. till the last line. "fuck" killed it. It's not just ur poem tho...i don't read any1's taht has it...it ruins it.....but other than that....I LOVED IT |
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