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its undescribable (please read)
written by trulybroken5708:46 PM 12/30/04this pain is
undescribable
i don't know
where it came from,
all i know is
that it's here,
eating me away,
changing me,
i'm feeling worthless.
sometimes
i'm okay,
like the hurt
has gone away
but then,
just when i've forgotten,
it's back again
to wreak havoc
on my life
please don't say i'm crazy,
i already know that's true,
tell me something
that i want to hear.
don't ask me why,
or what's wrong,
just be there for me
when i fall.
thank you |
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do u see now? please tell me what u think
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Foiazzy (12-30-2004 - 08:49 PM)
| I really like it! Good job. |
by forgotten-suicide (12-30-2004 - 09:03 PM)
| I don't think your crazy or insane. That is not even close to how I feel I think your a lost soul with no meaning but to find light. It was a good poem . keep up on your search. |
by (anonymous) (12-30-2004 - 09:13 PM)
| Deep. Really deep. I like it alot. Life is fucked up. People have different ways of dealing with it. This is a good way. I feel like that alot. Work on the good times. It gets better (and then worse again) Eventually something has to happen; right? |
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