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torn apart
written by DontFearAConcequence
05:34 PM 10/4/04
Today I woke up sad
I think about the dream I had
He left me and he never came back
Then without him I began to crack
Slowly I began to die
I think I love this guy
In my dream I took my life
Because of a guy I used a knife
Why did I let him drive me to do this?
I know if he left it would be him I’d miss
But my friends will always be my number one
I love them for all they’ve done
I feel like I’m being torn apart
Should I follow my mind, or follow my heart?
Why even think about this for any amount of time
Boys go, but these friends are always mine


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
it was pointless really...at age 14 i thought i was in love but my friends were drifting away from me...i dumped him and all was better

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