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» Poem: let you go
let you go
written by Xx brOken xX
08:11 PM 9/23/04
why cant i let you go!?
you've hurt me so bad
stabbed me in the back
stabbed me in the heart
you suffacated me
you suffacated my dreams; my life
you tied me down
and tortured me
hung me by a rope
and choked me
i could feel you cutting me open
ripping my heart out
you squeezed it so tight
smacked it around
until it was in pieces
so small of pieces that i couldn't
put it back together
you sit there and laugh
as i'm screaming in pain
as i'm screaming "i love you"
why cant i let you go???


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