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» Poem: Friend or foe?
Friend or foe?
written by Lovely_Suicide
12:25 PM 9/4/04
Kick me please
So i can see if im dreaming

Punch me please
So i can see if this is real

Pinch me please
So i can know what to do

Push me please
So i can tell if i should let go

Someone do something
I want to know if this is real.

Someone let me know
Should i trust him?

Im to hepless to see
Is this guy taking advantage of me?
Is he just leading me into a trap like everyone else?
Should i give him my trust?
Shit im in too deep
These decisions are to hard for me to handle
Shit i need to know is he a friend or a foe?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
ok this is shit but im so helpless rite now!!

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» Comments / Feedback
by Xx brOken xX (9-4-2004 - 06:41 PM)
its not shit. i liked it. i relate to it bc theres a guy that i cant tell if he likes me or if he's just using me.. it sucks..

by UNDEAD233 (2-1-2005 - 05:47 AM)
dont give him your trust cuz once you do thats when the turn one you

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