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Whats Goin On
written by DontFearAConcequence
01:56 AM 8/31/04
im in a crowd yet i feel alone
looking for a companion i aimlessly roam
i tried to tell my parents what these thought are driving me to do
they dont understand they cant see my point of view
all these pressures in my life drove me to become a pecimist
id tell my parents but they dont show any interest
when i brought up the idea that maybe its depression
they thought it was a skeme a cryout for attention
they dismiss my problems and get angry with me
maybe suicide is the way to truly make them see
my cries for help often go unheard
i try to tell people my thoughts but they act like they havent heard a word
everyone thinks i have adhd
i think ill just give up theyll never understand me


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i found out i DO have ADHD and i suffer from depression and all the happy shit but my parents wont let me get pills meh ill just kill myself then they will wish they would have let me get pills

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