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» Poem: Will it work the first time?
Will it work the first time?
written by Lovely_Suicide
02:38 PM 8/30/04
im pissed off so bad
Just finding out that i might not be able to kill myself the way i wanted
Maybe i should go for a noose
A gun anything just as long as i die.

I need to die i dont want to be here anymore
dosn't anyone understand that?
But first i should try and cut my wrist
Cut it to smitherins
If i fail then all is well cause then i will turn to my next option.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i really really really really want to die so badly oh i hope i cut my whole wrist right i just wanna die die die die if u no how i can suceed please tell me

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» Comments / Feedback
by Trapezium (8-30-2004 - 03:02 PM)
nooses barely work either... if you use a tree or something fairly weak then that could snap... if you use a shoelace or suchlike that could snap, if you use a rope it could fray... if you tie it wrong you're f**ked... if you hang slowly and don't get that "snap" it could take too long... you could be found... gun... well there's not much that can go wrong with that... but there's still a high chance of surviving... dont do it in the back of your mouth either... that wont hit the brain and will do little damage

by Suicidal_tears (8-31-2004 - 04:48 AM)
well u could always overdose on pills but like no matter how bad things r did u think that ppl will care n b upset trust me ppl will care n i kno how u feel i wanna die to but like my friend said that to me so i just thought i would say it to u n if it feels like no1 cares i do care so please dont hurt urself n if u wanna talk to u can e-mail me missunderstood_19@hotmail.com

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