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» Poem: my lover's suicide
my lover's suicide
written by XpaperdollX
01:21 AM 8/29/04
cold hands hit the floor,
no one was there,
i could have been there,
i would have saved him,
was there something i could have said,
he seemed so fine,
telling how much he loved me,
how i was the only reason why he lived,
he told me he was lost until he saw my face,
he loved the way i would smile,
telling me he use to watch me sleep,
whispering into my ear,
he told me i was his air,
without me he couldn't breath,
now his dead,
he rasied the gun to his head,
pulled the trigger never looking back,
as i sit here i remeber what he said,
it all adds up now,
but it's far to late,
dead....i know longer feel worth anything,
he made me as strong as i am today,
he made me feel pretty he mad feel hot,
i fealt smart around him,
but now his dead,
is there something i could have said,
if only i was there i would i could have saved him,
dead!!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i was in love him he was the only person i ever realy loved. but i never cried because of what happened he never made me cry. i love you baby.

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» Comments / Feedback
by TRADDS_LIL_SIS (8-29-2004 - 01:24 AM)
Taht is so sad...But i like it alot.

by death_by_suicide (8-29-2004 - 04:24 PM)
Im sorry for your loss, I know what you are going thru....very sweet.

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