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» Poem: Stupid Emotion's
Stupid Emotion's
written by psycho_bunny
05:30 AM 8/18/04
My emotions are running high,
I often stop to wonder why,
these thoughts run through my mind,
uncontroled and free,
leading me back to my misery.

Pains of my heart,
lead me back to the start,
my past is haunting,
when will this daunting end?
when can I be free again?

I cant stand another day of this pain,
I feel witherd and empty,
though my emotions continue to throb,
my emotions that flick from day to day,
happy and sad,
angry and annoyed,
I cant keep track,
I feel like doubleing back.

If I cant be saved,
then why do I still try?
still hoping that you can forgive me,
still hoping that it will someday be alright again.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I am so god damn stupid...

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» Comments / Feedback
by sonleef (8-19-2004 - 03:30 PM)
very good, but spelling you need to pay more attention to that. hoping has no "e" between the p and ing. i hope these comments are helpful my young friend

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