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» Poem: No Control
No Control
written by SuperBob
02:54 AM 8/14/04
There was this guy...who would always lie
Told me I had control of my life
Like hell I did back in the day
And even now...heh no way
I never made the decision of where to go
I would always go with the flow
Being my own person...yes I was
But I'd go with others just because
I couldn't be bothered with what to do
It never mattered when I was coming unglued
They never knew I was feeling so low
But I told him and his anger did show
He wanted me to do things that made me sick
So I withdrew, leaving him to play with his own dick
Now he hates me which is the best news I've ever received
See now I won't have to listen to him, while I wish to bleed


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
wow...i didnt think i would ever write of him...what was his name...Jon..i think that was it...well anyroad...he would send me on major guilt trips for not doign shit....the bastard...and always going on about how i had ocntrol...he didnt live my life...he wouldnt know...but meh i just told him off one day for the guilt...so yeah he hates me....but that is ever so great...i disliked him from day one...but me bieng the kind to put others feelings first sucked it up and still hung around until i couldnt take his words anymore....that was a proud day for me.... :D

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