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A cry for help...please comment
written by just-cant-be-me01:50 AM 4/23/05I hate it here,
Every night a new fight,
every year brings more tears.
People are starting to say things
And I am gettin scared
You try to blame it all on us
and soon it turns into one big fuss
You say that you dont hit us
But why does it bring tears
Why am i afraid
to stand up to my fears
so I cut myself and begin to bleed
in the puddle of blood that will appear,
all my troubles will disappear
You act like you care
But why wont u listen
what cant you hear?
Yes this is a cry for help. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (4-23-2005 - 03:02 AM)
| hey, i love your'r poem, and i am in your exact situation. It's nice to know im not alone in this. I have tryed to commit suicide and everything, but now im going to try and be stronger. and im not jus going to sit back and let this happen to me im going to do something about it, join me with courage and do something to, and dont be a coward with me and try to commit suicide we need to stop running, lets win, its our turn. |
by apple_10 (4-23-2005 - 03:06 AM)
| You are just immersing yourself in your depression, stop worrying about what you don't have, and be thankful for what you do! And you have no reason to cut, my friend has a tumor, ulcers, and many close people to him were torn away or died, and he doesn't cut, so please don't take the pussy's way out, and take it head on damnit.
(Sorry about being an asshole in my response, but these poems about cutting are A. Pointless and B. Just who the hell needs to cut? If you need help U2U me, and please stop the cutting, and that goes for everyone.) |
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