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Final lullaby (suicide poem nedz comment
written by mcr-goth2
01:21 AM 4/21/05
Dear anyone who can hear this cry,

this is my final lullaby
this is the last u will hear of me
this is the last i can say
Because this is my suicide poem that brought u2 pain
do not mourn ofmy death
or tell the world 2
i do not deserve attention for my final lullaby
so solong and goodnight
to this horrible world of pain and shame
so solong and goodnight
Because this is my final lullaby....


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plz ca u comment?

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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (4-21-2005 - 05:28 AM)
you know what genocide you fucking asshole...this poem is great, what the hell is wrong with you telling people to die? do you find sick pleasure watching people in pain?

by (guest) (4-21-2005 - 07:25 PM)
ive been there ive sang what i thought was my final lullaby...it obviously wasn't...if ur tired of livin and yu feel like u might giv in well dont....its not ur time...dont try to take Gods place...shit will happen the way its sposed to

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