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what you did to me...
written by Manson_Lover15
09:32 PM 4/18/05
you told me that you loved me.
you told me that you cared.
you told me that you would always be there.
you also : knew how I felt;
you made me promise to keep my life.

you were the only thing that made me feel good.
when I was with you I was happyy.
I was happy for once.
you knew that I was happy with you;
that I loved you too.
so why did you say horrile things about me?

now I no longer believe that you love me.

now, I no longer feel good,
I am un-happy once again.
and the promise about my life does not matter any
more.

so;
I will take my life.

I am not thinking about anything.
I am not thinking about the people in my life,
or; how this will affect them.
I am thinking about me;
how i finnaly; would be free.

you know what is going to happen.
you run towards me.
you are already to late.
the knife is already into me.
and then you see;
what you did to me.


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