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Efficating your Blood.
written by perfect.flaws06:08 PM 4/15/05Your efficating your own blood.
Think you have no dominance,
your just putting on a performance
Way too much egotism, it's only crimson.
Out of control, it's taken over?
Haven't you learned it's interim.
Don't try and say, you cant restrain,
trust me it's all in your brain. I contained.
Exposed Crimson is the real pain.
The veracity is there is no obstruction,
just get down to it, and stop your infections;
instead of annoucing your inlfictions,
that you caused all on your own.
Just stop! Stop Deploring!
Stop complaining how your all alone,
you brought this on your self. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I rewrote this..It needed to be touched up.
By the way..
Efficating-produce/producing [desirable effect]
Interim-Temporary
Veracity-truth etc
Deploring-Regreting...
If you needed to know.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Cut_Wrist_Risk (4-15-2005 - 06:14 PM)
| how do you cause EMOTIONAL paint o yourself? Atleast not my pain, you dont know what you're talking about well not in my case. |
by perfect.flaws (4-15-2005 - 06:22 PM)
| how??? well its quite easy.. i cant really explain it to well... i know you don't realize it right now but by cutting yourself you ARE in fact causing yourself deep emotional pain. |
by perfect.flaws (4-15-2005 - 06:23 PM)
| also i DO know what im talking about... i have scars up and down my arm. and they aren't pretty.. i used to cut.. and theres a reason dont now.. and there's a reason why you should just stop |
by (guest) (4-15-2005 - 06:52 PM)
| Hey, this is actually pretty decent! That makes one poem out of the ten that I have read so far today. Congrats. This had rhythm, and a message, other than 'I see red, then I'm dead'. Keep using that mind of yours; I'm glad someone thinks that their gray matter is more than worthless mush. |
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