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Parts Of Me *plz comment*
written by mishy007707:40 AM 4/15/05Parts of me will always prefer the dark side
While other parts will change, some will always hide
Parts of me will always want to use that knife
But other parts are starting to enjoy my life
Parts of me will always cry late at night
But parts of me will know that it's not right
Parts of me will always want to end it fast
Parts of me will always make the pain last
I will change, yet stay the same
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Just a lil thing sayin, 'yeh im gettin over my depression, but ill never be fully over it, but dont worry coz im not gonna end it'
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| » Comments / Feedback | by cassie_otten (4-15-2005 - 03:43 PM)
| i really liked this poem because it reminds me f how i feel. i always feel like no matter what happens i will always glance at suicide as an answer. your poem is inspiring and very well written. it flows really well and keeps your attention. |
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