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Cutting deeper
written by mansonlover9109:45 PM 4/14/05Each time I cut myself
I go just a little bit deeper
And pretty soon
I'll get to the vein
It will bleed
And I will probably die
So you wont see me again
So now say your good byes
Becasue if you dont
You might not be able to
Dont wait till later
Dont wait till tomorrow
Becaue I may not be there later
I may not be here tomorrow
So in this case Good bye |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Ruined_Hopes (4-14-2005 - 09:59 PM)
| Good Bye, sad i know. i like it and i wish i could hit my vein, but it moves! |
by ~:Arya:~ (4-14-2005 - 10:05 PM)
| "Keep your head on and don't look back, Your only mistake was going back, It's a cruel world and you're being sucked in deeper, But if you give up you're just another loser." Poems have a way of saying things you don't want to, so is this one of those things? Life's too short to cut anything, least of all yourself. It's a great poem, though what would your friends say? 'It doesn't matter, does it, they won't understand'. Guess what: you're wrong. Please keep writing, you're amazing. :) |
by Manson_Lover15 (4-15-2005 - 12:24 AM)
| It was a great poem; although not the best way to deal w/things; I can relate...keep writting. |
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