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written by silent*cry
02:21 PM 4/9/05
standing in the middle of a crowd
trying to shout at the top of my voice... but noone hears
A few heads turn around, i begin to cry bit nobody sees
they begin to look down at me, i huddle into a ball but nobody cares
I wave my arms in the air, a few people see my gashed wrists, but thet dont really notice,
Everyone is talking over me, they turn away and don't want to listen to my problems...
"shut up" i say
"just shut up" i say
"this is me" i say
"I need help" i say
But no one takes it in,
I take a gun
put it to my head
And pull the trigger
everyone hears the gunshot......there's silence....
Now they notice me,
now they care,
now they see me,
but im not there.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
no matta how loud i scream the people i love the most cant hear me...

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» Comments / Feedback
by mishy0077 (4-9-2005 - 03:02 PM)
:( nice poem

by Grind_wit_me (4-23-2005 - 05:50 AM)
WOW THAT'S SOME REAL SHIT.....GOOD JOB

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