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» Poem: Care.
Care.
written by Josh_x
04:36 AM 4/8/05
I said i don't care
But i guess it was a lie
I care so much it hurts
Although i wish i didn't
You told me not to care
I tried so hard
But it still hurt so much
I still cried until my cheeks froze
I still couldn't breathe
Whenever you said those words
You told me about your blood
Told me how it poured
You said you all you wanted to do was die
I just wish it was a lie
Do you ever try to be happy
Couldnt you try to smile
Maybe it'd help you
Help you to forget
All of your regrets
Maybe you just don't want to smile
Maybe you just don't care
About anyone but yourself
I guess i was right
I guess you were the one that didn't care
You left us all
Just so you could die
Leaving us to cry.


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» Comments / Feedback
by crazymunkeyluva (4-8-2005 - 04:43 AM)
it's really, really good. amazing! -sara

by promise_me_this_ (4-8-2005 - 05:13 AM)
hey i really liekd your poem!!!

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