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» Poem: please read
please read
written by magical_goddess_of_nature
10:43 AM 4/2/05
My heart tore in half,
By the painful words you says,
That kills a doom soul.


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» Comments / Feedback
by zver (4-2-2005 - 10:46 AM)
this poem is 3 lines liong and u managed to put in a spelling mistake and most of allur not me so tht should not be hapening anywyas tihs is the shittiest poem ive evr read

by mishy0077 (4-2-2005 - 10:46 AM)
NICE! WAY BETTA THEN zver's poems, the stupid ass wipe. lol. Great poem, keep it up!

by bloodlyvalentine (4-2-2005 - 11:06 AM)
its a good three-liner. keep it up!

by (guest) (4-2-2005 - 05:21 PM)
its a good poem keep writing, dont worry bout idiots like the one above..

by tamorapierce (4-5-2005 - 05:16 AM)
cool poem!!! Yeah, way better than zvers fucked crap!! Want to check out mine?

by (guest) (4-9-2005 - 07:32 AM)
that's you guys i will when i sign on here

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