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I saw *plz comment*
written by mishy007709:02 AM 3/30/05I saw you today with that slut
But I still kept my mouth shut
You were on her lap hugging her
You and her are always together
But you and your girlfriend are always apart
And I don't want my best friend with a broken heart
She knows that you want that slut, we all do
It wont be long that she'll say you're through
What about yesterday? Both late for class
I bet you were grasping that slut's arse...
You say you's two are only friends
But I can tie together the loose ends
She even has a boyfriend, she's tied down too
Now, what the fuck is going on between you two?? |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
another observation. I saw my friends bf on this chicks lap today, huggin her! I tried to keep my friend occupied but she might have seen. He treats her so bad. Some days he doesnt talk to her and other days hes all over her. And hes always hangin around with that chick i was tlkin about, and they are always flirtin and it makes me sick! I HATE HIM SO MUCH! PLEASE COMMENT?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by butcakes (3-30-2005 - 09:35 AM)
| seeing crap like that sucks... nice piece of poetry! just watch for a while... it will end up how it should be soon... it may break their hearts, but itll save them from more pain later... but if things get way too outta hand, it may be time to step up and say sumthing... this poem has the opportunity to have great relevance to peoples lives. congrats on presenting your feelings so well in poetic form. ;) |
by (guest) (4-2-2005 - 07:03 AM)
| thnx for writin that poem mishy now i know i'm not the only 1 goin through the that comes with love |
by (guest) (4-2-2005 - 07:04 AM)
| thnx for writin that poem mishy now i know i'm not the only 1 goin through the that comes with love |
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