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» Poem: Trust
Trust
written by lost_cause
10:35 PM 3/28/05
Words mean nothing when they come from a liar...

You say so much and I believe so little...
Until I build my trust in you.
I don't trust who I don't know...
I don't trust anyone who's new.
So I start believing what you say...
A little at a time.
I suppose that sonner or later...
I'll end up paying for this crime.
Trust is a funny little game...
You can't just win or lose.
You're constantly making choices...
So what happens is what you choose.
If you begin to trust someone...
They might break that trust.
They can never get it back...
Nothing's ever enough.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I don't like it at all... I think it's shitty... Comments?

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» Comments / Feedback
by Tel (3-28-2005 - 10:38 PM)
i think its pretty good

by Tel (3-28-2005 - 10:38 PM)
i think its pretty good

by Scythe42 (3-28-2005 - 10:58 PM)
that's really good. I can relate to it.

by (guest) (4-10-2005 - 06:53 PM)
.. well.. if i would have read this a day after it was writen.. i would have cried.. because its about me.. but now i have read it.. and i can just think what a screw up i am..

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