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» Poem: All the dumb feeling's
All the dumb feeling's
written by Xx_devangel_xX
09:08 PM 3/25/05
I cant save anyone so dont try to make me i cant feel anyone tryin to make me see them im not real but im not fake all these dumb feeling's come back to me take it away; make me feel like im someone real; becouse i cant find myself i cant see myself in the mirrior lost word's of request come to me followed by death i cant see you i cant hear you you no i would answere if i could im not real but im not fake all these dumb feeling's come back to me; take it away; make me feel like im someone real; becouse i cant find myself i cant see myself in the mirrior and all this wasted time i've been alone whern i could have had you to myself all these feeling's have masde me numb i cant breath i cant see you i cant find myself


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it's just how i feel about ppl.

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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (3-25-2005 - 09:15 PM)
hey its me katlin and i love it but it is sad. love katlin

by pleading*4*death (3-25-2005 - 09:49 PM)
its good

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