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You Made Me Cry
written by Evanescence
08:00 AM 3/23/05
You Made Me Cry

You made me cry
You tore me apart
You left me in tears
You shattered my heart

It wasn't your fault
I guess it was me
For love can't be forced
Perhaps we weren't meant to be

It still doesn't help
Now that I know
Because for some reason
My heart won't let go

I've tried more than once
To get over you
But you make it so hard
With cute things that you do

I thought love was joy
But I've got nothing to gain
Just sorrow, tears
And a little more pain

The day the pain started
Reality came too
It was the day that I realized
I'll never be with you


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i wrote this because my last bf did this to me

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» Comments / Feedback
by Spiffay (3-23-2005 - 09:07 AM)
I can really relate. My heart's been broken so many times by this one guy. Why do I still care so deeply for him? When I know this love can never be. Yet I keep going back and keep getting my heart broken over and over again. Maybe I guess I feel he's worth pursuing, and I'll probably keep going back to get my heart broken over and over until the day I die. I just don't care how many times I get hurt. I'd do anything for him to feel the same emotions.

by Bite2BreakSkin (3-23-2005 - 09:19 AM)
omg- i love this poem!! i can totaly relate, my hearts stitched up w/ the best stitches you can get at the moment, and im trying really hard not to rip these stitches. keep up the good work- its amazing.

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