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In The Darkness
written by RipMeOpen02:26 AM 3/23/05i am in the darkness
my wrists are red,
red from the blood,
i felt the knife,
it cut my skin,
oh the pain i felt,
i felt the blood,
running down my hand,
i am left in the darkness,
i am left for my death |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by ceres (3-23-2005 - 03:24 AM)
| I love it!!! But please say you don't cut, I won't allow it.... my friend is in a hospital cause he cut... so please don't. |
by poetic_tragity_x (4-7-2005 - 01:22 PM)
| That was really bad.
I'm not mean, just brutily honset.
The other chick..(If you're a chick) uuuhh...hope you're friend gets better.
My friend (no names) is in rehab for Mood Disorters, Eating Disorters, and the fact that shes Suicidal.
So i understand.
-Kelsey.
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