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» Poem: Once you're Fucked Its Hard StartingOver
Once you're Fucked Its Hard StartingOver
written by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx
03:20 AM 3/15/05
You see the edge
And you are continuously moving closer to it
So you like to cut your wrists
Life is pointless now
You got her pregnant
You're fifteen
She's fourteen
You both dropped out of school
You didn't need it
I think about when we met each other ten years ago
I had no idea things would deteriorate so fast
You wanted it and now you have it
You have told me about getting busted twice
All because you like ice and weed
What happened?
You're parents divorced and your Dad killed himself
You are stuck in juvie while you tell me this
You re still my best friend
We have been through thick and thin all of these years
And I will stand by you
Because you have always been there when my life was fucked up


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Dedicated to my friend i have known for ten years. He and his girlfriend are facing some tough times and I wanted to write this.

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» Comments / Feedback
by sexybabygurl0808 (3-15-2005 - 05:37 AM)
srry its just not my style, at times it dont make sense but hey dont listen to me its not like i know anything,,,,

by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx (3-15-2005 - 05:42 AM)
I geuss I wasn't writing it so much for the poetic sense, but just to get my feelings down and share them with others'. But thanks for the advice.

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