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lovers dance
written by jude12:10 AM 3/15/05The one I know and used to love.
Whom I thought was sent from the stars above.
She tore me open when given the chance.
When all I wanted was the lovers dance.
She waited for the right time.
To sink her teeth into the brine,
Of my heart,and now she dines.
So here I am bleeding,broken.
But I give a final token,
Of advice to you all.
Watch your heart,or you will fall. |
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just wrote it
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Evilmonkeysdance (4-15-2005 - 04:21 AM)
| I think this is one of the best poems i have read on zenhex, not even jokin, I love it, and im sorry if you rite about your realationship, I know how it feels to be hurt by someone you love, im going threw it rite now, IT SUX, IM me sometime or email me @
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