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» Poem: Dear Suicide,
Dear Suicide,
written by fuzzypunkhat
01:43 AM 3/10/05
You tried to ruin me many times,
You made me want to die,
Now I want to do it again,
You're not a help,
Not a friend,
You killed a friend and a star,
Your name stands out like the blood on the hood of my car,
I wrote this so you know how enraged I really am,
I thought I couldn't beat you but I can,
My love may lead to pain and lies,
But next time, it won't lead to a suicidal cry.
Sincerely,
You know who I am


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I know I was acting like death just picks people. I know people chose to hurt themselves lol.. Just wanted to put it in a different kind way. Comments/Suggestions

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» Comments / Feedback
by XsouredXfaithX (3-10-2005 - 01:48 AM)
its good to have it put in a differnet way so that people wont get caught up with their own ways

by hellhunk (3-10-2005 - 02:26 AM)
i liked it it sounded good

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