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» Poem: Life is perfect...not
Life is perfect...not
written by Talk_is_cheap--so_am_I
04:00 AM 3/7/05
My life is great
or so you say
I do well in school
I am the rolemodel.
And rolemodels just don't screw up.

So I act so perfect
Like nothing is wrong
Like I am happy as a clam
Everything is great - family
friends, school, life...not

So I can't be me
I can't be real
I can't be what I want to.
Everyone looks at me and I
hate it becuase it is scary.

What if I screw up sometime
or show my actual colors?
How I want to be punk, how I
just want to live and feel alive
and feel like I am me.

But I couldn't ever do that
Cause that would mean I'd failed.
That a rolemodel had finally screwed up.
And I can't do that because then everyone
would stare some more.

So yeah - my life is perfect,
if perfect is pressure, grades, preps,
being what everyone else expects.
Grand, oh great, life is perfect
If this is as perfect as life gets.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This is how I REALLY feel.

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» Comments / Feedback
by GrEeNxdAixlUVerx (3-11-2005 - 05:18 AM)
u rock......... be wat u wanna be.... if ppl stare at u more like ur a big freak fuck them all!!!!! be who u want..... trust me i am like u i have the same problem as u........ im really pretty ((not easy being pretty)), i got good grades, i am everything a person wants to be. but im really not like that...... i give u props 4 ur poem. Kaitlyn :-)

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