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» Poem: Rotten Candy Land
Rotten Candy Land
written by XpaperdollX
11:52 PM 3/3/05
All I seem to feel is pain,
Chocking on my candy cane.

Screaming, crying never stops,
Razorblades and lollipops,

All You need to know is this,
Candy here can slit your wrists.

You don’t seem to understand this is rotten candy land.

All I seem to feel is pain,
Drenched in acid gum-drop rain.

Screaming, crying never stops,
Safety pins and lemon drops.

All you need to know is this,
Candy here can slit your wrists,
I don’t think you understand this is,
ROTTEN CANDY LAND.


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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (3-4-2005 - 12:30 AM)
i love that! keep up the awesome poems!

by (guest) (3-4-2005 - 12:39 AM)
That poem was kick ass. It was really good. like a twisted version of candy land. They should make a board game like that............

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