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» Poem: confession...plz comment
confession...plz comment
written by sweetiepie89
02:38 AM 3/2/05
Forgive me, Lord, For I have sinned,
This is my first confession.
I fell in love, but broke my heart,
And developed a new obsession.

I miss him Lord, It hurts so bad,
He won't come back to me,
New life, new hopes and morals,
Are preventing him to see.

To see me here, still broken.
When so many days have passed.
Fading hope, and lifeless dreams,
Will allow this pain to last.

Forgive me, Lord, for I have sinned,
My innocence long since lost,
Made a mistake, for which I am sorry,
But I guess I'm still paying the cost.

Can't he see, Lord? I'm trying,
But this feeling is too strong,
I missed him then, but much more now,
Learning forever's so long.

I cry at night, seeing his face,
Feeling his breath on my skin,
His warm embrace, the only thing,
To suppress the pain within.

Forgive me, Lord, for I have sinned,
And I can't keep this inside,
I told him once, 'I'm over you,'
So I'm sorry, Lord, I lied.


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» Comments / Feedback
by xXGlitterFairyXx (3-2-2005 - 02:48 AM)
This is very good. I can connect with this very much so. I like this alot.

by (guest) (3-2-2005 - 03:09 AM)
i like this very much

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