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Wait One More Day (awesome! plz comment)
written by xxxvampire_loverxxx02:47 PM 3/1/05My whole world could end with the next word you say
I pray with my last breath that you wait at least one more day
My head fills with worry as your eyes fill with tears
You say that you're sorry, I recall all the memories, all the years
How can you just throw us away?
Why couldn't you have waited at least one more day?
I cherish the memories, I forget why we fought
I'm lost and broken now, I really loved you a lot
My love for you still grows, it'll never go away
Still, I must know why you couldn't have waited at least one more day |
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Writer: Shelby L. Allen
Dedication: Tyson R. Mills
3/1/05
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Imbeyondthelight (3-1-2005 - 03:03 PM)
| I feel horrible. Sorry for the though of breaking up. Its a beautiful poem and made me feel bad.Seriously I want to kick this guy's ass. Well I loved the poem and if you need someone to talk to you can U2U me if you like. |
by ForeverUnseen (3-4-2005 - 04:09 PM)
| wow that's so amazing...I hate having no words to describe things...but it's wicked good... |
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