» Poem: you hurt me*comment* |
you hurt me*comment*
written by sweetiepie8903:30 AM 2/26/05isnt it amazing what passes for a life when you live in pain and chaos and stife
you hurt me
how did you make me feel that i had to pay to make it right...that it was my job to erase the pain that you felt all of your life?
how how did you ever come to believe that by devaluing me, you'd learn not to grieve?
couldn't you see all the pain i was feeling....what on this earth could that have bee healing?
you hurt me
you said "it would be an adventure, it came from a good place." it was designed yo demean me, to keep me in my place
and once the sexual adventure began...i lost who i was, i hate who i am...
you hurt me, in a way i can never explain.... |
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» Comments / Feedback | by xolovetoswimxo (2-26-2005 - 03:32 AM)
WOW ITS A GREAT POEM I LOVED IT!
hey can you read my poems and comment on them as well {im just asking you dont have to if u dont want to} |
by xolovetoswimxo (2-26-2005 - 03:32 AM)
WOW ITS A GREAT POEM I LOVED IT!
hey can you read my poems and comment on them as well {im just asking you dont have to if u dont want to} |
by twzeentch (2-26-2005 - 03:34 AM)
i like that poem there has been many times in my life that things happened and i hated someone or myself |
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