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Now he can't
written by Trapezium01:51 PM 7/16/04He walks alone wherever he goes,
He feels a pain that no-one knows,
Everyone's around,
They make a lot of sound,
But he doesn't hear them he can't,
They touch him but he can't,
Respond or feel the hand on his face,
He stays there standing what a disgrace,
Hands in his pocket wristband over his scars,
The thoughts in his mind of jumping infront of cars,
The empty sanctuary of his mind,
Is where he goes leaves everything behind,
But it follows him until he can't take it,
All he wants is a slah or a slit,
He wants one that will work this time,
Instead of failing a failure sublime,
He walks to the door and it opens,
Enter his ex that made his decisions,
She gives him a knife wraps it under his fist,
"Here take this and slash your wrist"
He would've if it wasn't for a promise,
A promise he would've loved to have missed,
Sadness, worry, pain, anger, hate,
A few sorrowful emotions to which he can relate,
He wants to take his life but now he wont,
He is so confused and a voice says "do it no don't"
He tries to tell someone but doesn't know where to begin,
He feels that his life is one big sin,
A walking disorder is what he calls himself,
His heart ripped apart then placed on a shelf,
He has so many masks that fall to pieces,
The trousers of his mind are filled with creases,
He only wants one thing to happen to him,
And now there's no way it can happen to him,
All because of a promise a mistake,
Now he can't drown in the water of a lake. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I'm not going to kill myself or hurt myself... the promise i made you will forever be true Cassie
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Lucifers Kiss (7-16-2004 - 03:30 PM)
| It's really good!!! Great, actually! |
by Psycho_Penguin (7-16-2004 - 08:05 PM)
| Great poem... Unfortunetly I can relate to a lot of that...
I loved the line:
"He wanted one that would work this time,
Instead a failed failure sublime."
Or something close to that. |
by Psycho_Penguin (7-16-2004 - 08:05 PM)
| Great poem... Unfortunetly I can relate to a lot of that...
I loved the line:
"He wanted one that would work this time,
Instead of a failed failure sublime."
Or something close to that. |
by SuperBob (7-17-2004 - 05:35 AM)
| HOLY HELL!!!! THAT JUST AMAZING!!! INCREDIBLY AMAZING!!!!...I am in pure awe!!!! wow!!! |
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