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About Ethereia
written by Tanasa_bg11:21 PM 2/18/05Hey, Ethereia
Don't mess with me,
include my band,
cuz u'll see
how deadly is my hand!!
U piece of shit,
u fuckin' faggot, u'll soon meet
da death, u maggot!!!
I'll kill yo' father,
I'll rape yo' mother
I even wish
u be my little brother!!
I'll beat u more
that u could think
I'll take yo' head,
just give me single blink!!
I hope u die
but not so far away from me
so I can see
yo' dying face,
YO' FUCKIN' DYING FACE !!! |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by TONK_PILLZ (2-18-2005 - 11:33 PM)
| Gotino...ama ima6 gre6ki:( |
by 666_TonKpills_666 (2-18-2005 - 11:34 PM)
by The Black Halo (3-12-2005 - 01:43 PM)
| Thank you for the laugh, it was rather amusing.
You tell me that my writings aren't poetry, then you submit something shoddy like this! What is this? It certainly isn't what any intelligent person would call poetry.
I will 'mess' with whoever I want, and in no way can you stop me. Your futile attempts are mere dust particles, as opposed to the large attacks I've suffered from more significant beings.
Tut tut, forced rhyme in the first stanza. How pathetic.
What is it that makes me a 'maggot' anyway? I'm hardly fishing bait, and if I was, you'd be a mere atom.
My father is already dead, think of something new. Go ahead and rape my mother, I wouldn't really care. I know you don't have the guts to do anything you speak of, though. They're just empty threats of a humourous value.
Everyone dies. It's the only certain thing in this world. You still haven't worked that out? What are you, a retard?
You wont ever see my 'dying face' anyway. Bulgarian asshat's don't have that privelige. |
by gouldies_wee_sister (4-5-2005 - 10:11 PM)
| Ethereia yer a fukin faggot m8 ! so get 2 fuk n stop critisisin ppls poems n leave gd comments n never mind bout the fukin english ! like the poem but not all gd poems nessesarily have 2 ryhme. |
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