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Eight Roses
written by XxXkissmeHarDXxX08:42 PM 2/13/05You gave me 8 roses
Four days before i died
For 8 months of love
One no of which i cried
You tried to cover it up
But i knew so well
Gossip spreads quick
You couldn't tell?
You gave me 8 roses
Four days before i died
Two roses faded
The first day i cried
I questioned you once
But you denied the accusitions
I know you lied to me
So i started making my desicion
You gave me 8 roses
Four days before i died
Four roses are left
On the second day when i creid
I scetched out a plan
IN the back of my mind
A once in a lifetime desicion?
To leave the world behind
You gave me 8 roses
Four days before i died
Two roses i hold
As i silently cry
My plan succeded
As i locked the door
One little bullet
And i would cry no more
You gave me 8 roses
Four days before i died
No roses remain now
As i watch you cry |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
its funny how guys think they can cheat on u, and u'll NEVER find out, cuz we always do
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| » Comments / Feedback | by XsouredXfaithX (2-13-2005 - 08:44 PM)
| im sorry you got hurt but the pain caused you to write a damn good poem...good job man |
by Darkwolfgirl (2-14-2005 - 03:34 AM)
| it sucks when guys typically think between their legs, but you wrote a magnificent poem in your painful time. great job, and sorry. |
by kryppled (2-18-2005 - 06:07 PM)
| that was a tear-jerker..great poem |
by (guest) (2-20-2005 - 04:13 AM)
| i really like that poem verry good |
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