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Thank you (comments please?)
written by mishy007707:07 AM 2/11/05You showed me why I should live
You showed me what I can give
You showed me how to smile again
You showed me how to rid the pain
You showed me a bright side to life
You showed me let it out without a knife
You showed me how much you care
You showed me you'll always be there
Thank you, I need you
and I'll always I love you |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
PLEASE COMMENT!!!
This poem is for, Rory, my bf, coz he made me get help and now I am happy and I don't want to end my life anymore. I LOVE YOU RORY SO MUCH!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Jimmy_Lippstikk (2-11-2005 - 07:08 AM)
| it's what every bipolar girl needs...a loving guy that will love her forever. |
by HdHype (2-11-2005 - 07:09 AM)
| congratz, the poem is simple but to the point, and its a damn good point. |
by mishy0077 (2-11-2005 - 07:10 AM)
| Thank you. You like me, you really like me. lol. How sad? im commenting on my own work. lol |
by vamp1rette (2-11-2005 - 03:19 PM)
| this poem is what every girl wants. |
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