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Everything I Could Ever Want
written by xxxvampire_loverxxx
11:24 PM 2/10/05
It's more of the story I submitted on here a few weeks ago. It's not very much so please read and comment.

Later on that night, Michael and I went to a fancy restaurant. There was a gentleman standing at the door, waiting for our arrival. He opened the door and took our coats. There was lovely music and a spectacular waiter. The restaurant was only lit by candles and dim lights. Roses were on every table. It was perfect. I had been to the restaurant once before. It was the place Michael took me on our first date.
Michael told me to order whatever I wanted and that tonight was going to be special. I just ordered a small salad and an iced water.
After the meal, he said,”Baby, I have a question to ask you,” I knew something was up. Michael and I hadn't gone anywhere fancy since our first date a few years ago. “Yes babe, what is it?” He rose from his chair and kneeled infront of me. My heart started to race. My head filled with so many things he could say. He held my left hand, pulled out a small burgundy box, looked me straight in the eyes and began to speak. “Krystal Marie Steel, will you marry me?” I gasped, My eyes filled with tears and I all of a sudden felt more free than ever. “Yes. Yes I'll marry you. Yes!” I looked him straight in the eyes. He started smiling. Tears rolled down my cheeks. I'd never been more happy in my life.


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Just more of the story I submitted on here a few weeks ago. Comment plz.

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by shaunnas_donna_143 (2-20-2005 - 01:14 PM)
he sounds like a great guy and im happy for u but may i ask how old are u?

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