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» Poem: Coffee Shop (please Comment)
Coffee Shop (please Comment)
written by ForsakenDream
01:03 AM 2/9/05
Were have you been?
I guess I missed you again.
Its ok if you forgot,
We'll try again next time at the coffee shop.
You seem to always dissapear,
You claim to be, but your never really here.
Its to late to try and call,
I dont know why I bother at all.
Its somthing about you Im attracted to.
I try to let myself in but you shut me out,
Still trying to remember which part of you I cared about.
Is it the suductive smile, or the suductive eyes?
Or the fact that deep inside your just trying to cry?
I sit awake again tonight,
Watching as my shadows take flight.
Woundering still what happend that day,
I walked alone with nothing to say.
A lonley tear from my broken heart,
Still trying to repair from being torn apart.
Were are you now?
Probaly bringing someone else down,
And ripping their hearts out.
Now that I think, Im glad you forgot,
You'll never see me again in that old Coffee Shop.


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» Comments / Feedback
by darkflames (2-9-2005 - 01:06 AM)
hey, this is good. on a scale of 1-10 I give it a full 10!

by Bloody Tears (2-9-2005 - 01:32 AM)
that is really good i give it a 9and a half cuz nothing perfact

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