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scars
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk05:41 AM 1/31/05| Look at what you''ve done to me, I was never like this before. I should've known you were never for real, but my love was so damn pure. You hurt me in so many ways, I never knew what to do. I'd slide the blade across my skin, but the worst pain was being without you. As much as I wanted to be around you, it always made me cry. You'd sometimes try to make me feel better, but I knew it was all lies. Press deeper on my skin feel the burnin sinsation, this little pain is no match, for my love and temptation. I offered you anything and everything I could, if I had to die for you in a second I would. I wish to be granted death, instead of ever falling in love, I watched the blood flow from my wrist but once was never enough. Now all I have on my wrists are scars on top of scars. But the biggest cut I have untreated, is left still bleeding on my heart. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by zver (1-31-2005 - 05:42 AM)
by zeroblud (1-31-2005 - 05:44 AM)
| That was awsome, i really liked it |
by zeroblud (1-31-2005 - 06:35 AM)
| To zver,
Will you just shut up you little anal probe, if people want to be depressed then let them be, people aren't harping on you for being a gay little fucktard are they? |
by (guest) (1-31-2005 - 11:56 PM)
| that was a good poem, but it seems to me like u are cutting over this person, but it might not b true..if u are cutting over this certain person, its not worth it trust me ive been cutting for 2 1/2 years dnt waste ur life by cutting wen u can b moving on and getting better! |
by (guest) (2-1-2005 - 04:33 AM)
| its mary....they called me a guest....fools but yes OMG im so happy you put this poem on here!!! this is one of my favorite ones youve ever wrote its awesome! your going to go far as a writer....i kno these things! lol luv ya lots ~mary |
by (guest) (4-11-2005 - 05:19 AM)
| zver u shot yourself!!!!!!! |
by (guest) (4-11-2005 - 05:19 AM)
| zver u shot yourself!!!!!!!
{ Not literally } |
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