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» Poem: You... (love... I know...)
You... (love... I know...)
written by lost_cause
12:29 AM 1/6/05
I hold tight onto your hand as if you might leave
Though if you did it probably wouldn't surprise me
I love how easily you tend to make me laugh
With some other people it can be a hard task
I love how you look into my eyes and not at my chest
And the way that you drool is always the best!
I feel like I can be myself when you are there
And the fact that I cut doesn't even give you a scare
I'm not good at love poems, that fact is true
But this is the one I dedicate to you...


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I know I suck at love poems... Comments?

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by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (1-6-2005 - 12:42 AM)
that was fucking sweet! and you don't suck! that was beatiful!!!

by Devil_Pixie (1-6-2005 - 01:09 AM)
hey thats great and true!! keep it up

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