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» Poem: Back in the Forest
Back in the Forest
written by blackened_rose
05:56 PM 1/3/05
Back in the forest
The whispers persuaded
The way my dearest
Life had ended

Once unpon a time
Back when we both had a soul
When we used to drink wine
And when we felt so full

You where my lover
For I thought of you always
You where my enchanter
And fallowed me threw out the days

Back in the day
When we thought of once was
Where we knew the things to say
For the sake of because

These roses bleed
Like my unending heart
You are the seed
That tore me from the start

Pray for the days
That once were
Pray for your ways
That are now a blur

The sunsetter is here
And has come to take one
All you have is fear
And you try to run

Why so simple is death,
You fear it, why?
Along time ago, your soul left
And yet, yoiu don't cry.

Life is such a priceless gift
One that you cannot own
Life you once did live life
But of course that's what you've blown

Good by dear
For I cannot help you now
Soon I'll share your fear
As my head begins to bow


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Work in progress!!!!!!!!!!!!

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» Comments / Feedback
by (anonymous) (1-21-2005 - 06:02 PM)
the second line sound like a copy of a line from a song by Cradle of Filth

by (anonymous) (1-21-2005 - 06:03 PM)
the second line sound like a copy of a line from a song by Cradle of Filth

by blackened_rose (2-26-2005 - 05:39 AM)
it does?

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