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» Poem: someone please read...
someone please read...
written by Psychoace
10:17 AM 1/2/05
Crystal no it can't be.....

NOOOOO!!

my love, my life, my wife....

did i do it to you......

Goddamnit what the fuck am I.....

We were going to have joy but i destroyed that...
you had my seed in you.....why GOD WHY!!!!!!!!!!

I.....I.......didn't mean to do this to you.....
please get up....get up from the floor.....
it......didn't happen *crying uncontrolably*

No.........God.............no............
i must have you here with me or i have you in the next.....

What the fuck did i do to you....

You told me he was ours and i was so happy....
I didn't mean to crush you my son....
I didn't meant to rush you my love...

I swear i'll never be happy again it hurt you and so i shall remain in this melancholy tone forever cursed and haunted by what i've done to you.......

Death escapes me not anymore i see every thing
no...........GOD.......why!!!!!!

Did i do this................


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
random shit put together i just found out some fucked up shit and i'm like super depressed *FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!*

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» Comments / Feedback
by devils angel 13 (1-2-2005 - 03:59 PM)
very good.

by Confused_Girl (1-2-2005 - 09:29 PM)
I liked it very much, I hope everything works out for you!

by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (1-3-2005 - 01:39 AM)
that vas really good. I think?

by DrAmAQuEeN (1-4-2005 - 08:15 AM)
its good, hope ya feel better

by xTroubledAngelxo (1-4-2005 - 10:37 PM)
Dude, nice poem, wanna talk bout it??? -

by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (1-6-2005 - 12:54 AM)
top 25! yay......that is sad tho....

by AngelEyedJuggalette (1-7-2005 - 03:10 AM)
The poem is really good and if you want to talk about it I will be here to talk bout it

by MentalPyroChick (1-9-2005 - 05:45 AM)
That has alot of emotion in it, i like it.... hope stuff works out for ya ~Jani

by MentalPyroChick (1-9-2005 - 05:45 AM)
That has alot of emotion in it, i like it.... hope stuff works out for ya ~Jani

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