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» Poem: Hurts
Hurts
written by Firequeen
04:17 PM 12/31/04
Those small words u spoke
trying to make a joke
those my heart broke.

This ifernal pain
streaming trough my vein
from it, there is no gain

You should have known better
don't try an "I am sorry" letter
faulse regretter.

Look at what uve done
now, I am all gone
nothing you have won

Slice me rather with your sword
than strangle me with evil-words cord
from this, what's your reward?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Damn fucking fool pretending your better than the other, your just the same. Thinking of only one thing

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» Comments / Feedback
by (anonymous) (1-1-2005 - 05:11 PM)
u ar verry happy but not I u must think about ur friends mother father and ur sweet head.

by (anonymous) (1-1-2005 - 10:42 PM)
hi its so nice

by (anonymous) (1-2-2005 - 04:04 PM)
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