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» Poem: Punk bitch
Punk bitch
written by Genocide Reaper
02:00 AM 12/20/04
Punk bitch can you hear me? I want you to feel my fist smashing your face, breaking those cheek bones, crushing you and your crown, destroying you, filling you with pain, until the greatness of violence feeds you. Now step on up, punk ass I will eat you alive, take away all of your life, kill you in an instant, beat you to death, that's why. Its what I want to do. Now unto you I say fuck you, I hate, I know it hurts you. How I pain you, I'm just insane, now step up and be a man. Bring a violent plan, Because the leads going to rip out through the back of your head! I want to see you dead! I will bring no concern, I fear you not, just another weak minded weak bodied fool with a foul mouth, I want to watch you wither and decay another lifeless body, another broken doll brought down by foolish folly. I am very different from you, this is what makes me so much better than two. I'm above your high talk, I walk the wicked walk, I speak with a silver tongue, spewing agonizing words. Now bow down, I own this world, I fucked your girl, I ripped out that heart and spun it on a pike. you are, just another kid, trying to win, with talk, now bow down, praise me, you cannot phase me, just another meat punk ass meat puppet, what can you do? Iv utterly proved that I own you.


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» Comments / Feedback
by sarah10087 (12-20-2004 - 05:22 PM)
I think you'll find you are the true puppet. A puppet of your own demise.

by Genocide Reaper (12-20-2004 - 07:46 PM)
You don't know me cunt. And if I do fucking die, then I fucking die. and so be it. I'm not afraid.

by BigBombB (12-20-2004 - 08:56 PM)
You would think that after hitting 600, you'd not suck at writing, but you do. Oh, how you do.

by (anonymous) (12-20-2004 - 10:36 PM)
wow... something is really wrong with you.. i suggest you don't write any more poems, cuz they are really gay ; )

by hatedandused (12-21-2004 - 05:59 AM)
That was awesome.

by hatedandused (12-21-2004 - 05:59 AM)
That was awesome.

by Erix (12-21-2004 - 10:12 PM)
These fucking loser critics dont know shit your poems own and as i have said before sara shut your fucking prep mouth

by XxheartbrokenxX (12-22-2004 - 06:39 PM)
You people are crazy.His poems are just fine.Dont listen to them people like me like your dark side,dont stop writing.ERIX YOU ARE A PREP!!!!

by so_unpredictable (12-24-2004 - 03:00 PM)
Woah lots of emotion creapy but good writing ;)

by (anonymous) (12-25-2004 - 03:39 AM)
since when did the poetry page become a forum to bitch and whine about everything ? if you don't like his poems then don't read them, don't dignify those beneath you with a reply genocide

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