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» Poem: What my eyes show
What my eyes show
written by KaoticKitty87
08:20 PM 12/11/04
what do you see when you look in my eyes
do you see the evil on the rise
I know its not love you see
for in my heart that will never be
can you see the sadness in my eyes
can you see all the times I have cried
I wonder does the struggle show on my face
I know it shows on this blood covered lace
I just want meaning in my life
why is life such a damned strife
everyone is always in my way
they wonder why I torture and slay
can you see the tears in my eyes now
the anger is swelling and death I vow
the dagger gleams in the reflection of my eyes
block me? go ahead and try
my anger is too much to let you win
my dagger flashes again and again
oh gee, there you are dead
your body is already heavy as lead
for their own safety, I hope no one crosses my path
for my anger has still not lapsed


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
yea...Im a tad bit angry

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» Comments / Feedback
by silent_tears (12-11-2004 - 08:25 PM)
*BIG hug* cheer up hun! even if u r sad,u shud b proud to hav written a poem like that!!

by Darkwolfgirl (12-12-2004 - 03:19 AM)
that is an awesome poem. great job. i love it.

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