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I'll Take All The Blame
written by Morbid Angel09:37 PM 11/29/04I'll be alright because I have this blade.
I don't have any choice,
But I'll take all the blame,
Put the world on my shoulders,
Watch me collapse with the weight,
One day I'll die because of your pain.
Shift everything you've ever carried onto my back,
I'll take the weight as the world goes black,
Life sucks at the point of no return,
Keeping on a peak is a lesson we'll never learn.
Belief is for the broken and hope is for the weak,
I won't bother listening because I know I won't believe.
I'll take all the blame,
Shift the weight of the world onto my shoulders again.
I tell you what, just put your arms around me,
For once, just tell me a happy story,
I can't stand the weight I'm forced to carry,
I'll take all the blame as you stand there staring,
Nobodies listening and nobodies caring,
I've got this weight and I've got this blade,
Put them both together and you've got a whole lot of pain. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I'd like to thank all_yours for the comment left at the bottom of my poem. I'd like you all to read it and learn from it. I would of added it into the poem because it was beautiful...but it wouldn't make sense. Thank you for that.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by all_yours (11-29-2004 - 10:49 PM)
| let the blame fall from your shoulders to mine using a blade is crossing the line why do you carry what doesnt belong to you you may be strong but you are few ill help you carry their pain i hand you my help never take it in vain i want you to want me to be by your side i have no strings attached and nothing to hide |
by (anonymous) (11-29-2004 - 11:34 PM)
| *cries* That was lovely... |
by Genocide Reaper (11-30-2004 - 04:59 PM)
| I can't think of a word to say.. Its just. Cold as Ice. Colder really. xD |
by XxGothicYamixX (12-2-2004 - 06:54 PM)
| let it fall flat to the ground infront of your face,
let it fall its not your place,
carrying such a thing can be pain,
dont let yourself fall to the vain,
reclaim yourself for who you are,
dont let the world burn out your star,
i'll help you out and you set down that blade,
i'll stand beside you on our shoulders the world is laid,
do not say that it is lost and never found - dont tell yourself that youre not strong enough to be,
because the one standing by you is we.
- i love your work! *thumbs up* |
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