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A friend in need
written by lost_cause08:12 PM 11/16/04Tainted eyes look into mine
Pleaing for my help
Advice is needed that I don't have
For the pain that she's been dealt
I feel so bad that I can't help
I want to see her smile
I hate how shit ruins everything
Cuts bleeding for a while
Her scars and pain are showing
I still can't help her out
She's lost inside her questions
Confused from all the doubt
I couldn't bear to lose her
Over anything at all
I really hope that she pulls through
I couldn't stand to see her fall |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (11-16-2004 - 08:15 PM)
| Heartfelt, emotional, caring, flowing. Well done |
by bleedblack (11-18-2004 - 11:09 PM)
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